This is one of my favorite interviews. Steve Berry is honest and direct.
Take a few minutes and see if he doesn't have something to say you can use today.
CR: Thrilled to Death by LJ Sellers.
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Showing posts with label criticism. Show all posts
Showing posts with label criticism. Show all posts
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Thursday, May 6, 2010
What Do You Need?
Sheesh. Some days I have nothing to say. Others . . .
It's important to decide what it is you really need when you ask someone to critique a few of your pages.
Are you looking for someone to tell you how wonderful you write, or are you looking for someone to help you improve?
I admit there are days when I hunger for gentle words that lift me up and feed me. Actually, there are a lot of days like that. I'm human, and I often forget how brilliant and amazing and gifted I am. It helps to be reminded. Makes me feel loved. I tell you this just in case one of these days you read something of mine I've actually slaved over. Or bake you an apple-nut cake.
But where my writing progress is concerned I only get better if I have a few doubts. Doubts that propel me to get an honest appraisal and solid advice with which to improve. I don't much care if someone wants to tell me a better way to change oil. I do want to know if there's a better way to structure a scene or insert misdirection or switch POVs.
Most of the critiques I receive are a combination of affirmation and information. Those are wonderful. I'm getting a little meat with my milk.
But you have to know what you want, and embrace what you need. They aren't always the same.
I recently read about a woman (true story) who nagged and nagged someone who was a little farther up the publishing chain to read something she'd written. The more successful author had to actually give her some credit for persistence, and after a while, acquiesced. When the woman received the feedback, she was quite upset about the critical comments. She determined that the stars were not aligned properly and thus elected to disregard any of the comments made about her writing. After all, they couldn't possibly have any merit.
If you want to be told only what a wonderful writer you are, let someone who really doesn't know very much about writing—and who loves you—read your work.
If you want to build your base, understand the architecture, and move to the next level, search out someone who will not only see where improvements can be made, but will tell you. Sometimes they'll be gentle, sometimes they'll be blunt. But it's all designed to make you think. Once you can think about the comments (rather than feel them) you can decide whether or not you agree.
And if you're having one of those "needy" moments, set the critique aside and wait until you're more open to ideas to make your writing better.
CR: 212 by Alafair Burke.
Working On: Incorporating my newest edits.
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Thursday, November 19, 2009
Open for Criticism
I just read where occasionally (and recently) a publisher will post an author's unedited manuscript online for a limited time and ask for reader's input. The one that occurred recently was further developed and ultimately published.Years ago, Lisa Scottoline's publisher posted her first chapter online and asked for feedback. Apparently the writing was so bad it was difficult to figure out the plot. By the time the book was released, it was wonderful. ***read comments to learn what REALLY happened. ***
My first thought was wonder at the courage of the author, then curiosity as to the scope and quality of feedback. Finally, my wonder centered (and continues to center) around the question of how in the world those lousy manuscripts made it as far as they did.
Doesn't seem fair, does it?
CR: Urgent Care by CJ Lyons.
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