Showing posts with label cutting scenes. Show all posts
Showing posts with label cutting scenes. Show all posts

Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Word Scurge—Dirge?




Read over your compositions, and whenever you meet with a passage which you think is particularly fine, strike it out.
~ SAMUEL JOHNSON


Wordy-Gurdy.
Not so sturdy.
How does your rewrite go?

I'm cutting more than I'm adding. I switched my prologue to a scene either in the first or second chapter, and have cut my first two scenes and replaced with later scenes from the beginning of chapter two and a new one written. Plus, the two I've cut (well, one of them anyway), contain value, and I'd like to see if there's a relevant place before I relegate them to "outta here", and well . . . it's getting confusing.

I'd anticipating axing blah scenes and truthfully, I was ready. Just not so soon. Oy.

I'm an organized, tidy person. Really. But at this moment I have four piles on my desk and five piles on the floor by my desk. That's not counting the printed material sitting in my printer tray which will form a brand new pile.

I had the French doors open earlier because that's my habit when the temperature is fabulous (we're having an unusually cool summer in Colorado) and totally lucked out that a brisk breeze didn't find its way in.

My fear has been released and replaced with mad-cap/mad-dash craziness. Which is kind of creative. At least at the moment.



CR: The Dead Whisper On by T.L. Hines

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