
Which sort of leaves me with only 994 to call my own.
Have you ever tried to write a story . . . an interesting story . . . with 994 words? I have a basic one completed that I don't think is too bad, but one of my cps (critique partners) thinks I need to put my protag in greater imminent danger. Which means I need to punch it around a little more.
And the contest deadline is looming.
A couple of points I've discovered that are helpful in writing a short story:
• Write tight. Every word must be needed. Look for those strong verbs whenever possible.
• You still need a character arc. Between the first word and the last word, your character needs to have been changed.
• For suspense, that character needs to be in imminent danger, not just perceived or possible danger. Aargh.
Just finished reading Kill Me.
Yesterday worked on installing a badly needed new modem. Oy.
Currently working on trying to find a few moments between visiting with company to write . . . anything.
It's all better with friends.
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